VADER'S QUEST - Photonovel

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Someone told me about this board for posting my picture stories. I have been posting this & other stories in the ROTS threads.

The story is not complete, but the following has all of the sections so far. Enjoy!

RECOMMENDATION: The best way to view the entire story is to change your thread settings to display no more than 5 or 6 posts. If you load all of the posts at once, there will be over 100 pics to load.
 
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"VADER'S QUEST"

INTRODUCTION


VADER: (thinking) Padme has to be alive. I’ve felt her presence.




VADER: (thinking) Someone is trying to hide her from me. But she cannot hide from the Power of the Force.





VADER: (thinking) I must know what happened to her. There is no one to stop me this time.





VADER: (thinking) I know of just the spy who can find her for me.





VADER: She will be mine once again. You have my word, Padme, I will find you.




THE EMPEROR APPROCHES




VADER: What is thy bidding, my Master?
EMPEROR: There is a great disturbance in the Force.




EMPEROR: Obi-Wan Kenobi and Master Yoda are still alive. They pose a great threat to our Empire.




EMPEROR: Find them, Lord Vader. Wipe them out. Do no rest until this is done.
VADER: Yes, my Master.




EMPEROR: Very soon, we will crush this insignificant Rebellion. Everything is proceeding as planned.



To be continued.....
 
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INTRODUCTION CONTINUED


VADER: The Emperor demands we find Obi-Wan and Yoda.
TARKIN: How do you propose we find them? They have gone into exile.



VADER: Arrange a meeting with the Wookies from Kashykkk. They had good relations with Yoda.




TARKIN: And what about Obi-Wan? Senator Organa has also gone missing.
VADER: Leave them to me. I will deal with them myself.




CLONE: Lord Vader, Djas Puhr has arrived.
VADER: Send him in.



TARKIN: I will leave you to your business. I will contact the Wookies immediately.




VADER: Find the former Jedi, Obi-Wan Kenobi. As soon as you have made contact, report back for further instructions.
DJAS: What will my compensation be?




VADER: The Empire will pay you enough. Find him quickly.
DJAS: Sounds like a personal matter to me. That will cost you extra.




VADER: Do not make me destroy you! Best if you walk away now, while you still can.



VADER: The troopers will show you out. Now go....
DJAS: Very well...



VADER: Prepare my shuttle. I have another matter to attend to.




To be continued...
 
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Introduction continued



AT A SECRET LOCATION

CLONE: Don’t move.
VADER: There will be a substantial reward for finding Senator Bail Organa.
He has contacts that are critical to the Empire.




VADER: Leave us, troopers.
CLONE: Yes, Sir.




VADER: This assignment is of the utmost importance. Do not engage the Senator.
Upon finding him, send me your location & wait for my arrival.




VADER: You will find him. Failure is not an option.




VADER: For your success, Garindan, you will be well paid.
This will earn you future assignments.






BACK AT THE SITH TEMPLE



TARKIN: The armor designed by the Kaminos for our troopers has served its purpose
during the Clone Wars. However, the Republic is no more.




TARKIN: Maintaining peace in the Galactic Empire is now the job
of our Troops, which require agility and quickness. After much research and analysis,
I have re-designed their armor to meet these important needs.




TARKIN: May I present to you all the new Stormtrooper.
 
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Introduction continued


BAIL: Welcome, Captain Panaka. I am honored that you have accepted my invitation to come to Alderaan.



PANAKA: Thank you, Senator Organa.
BAIL: Please, don't call me a Senator. I have given up that public life.



BAIL: My current situation has put me in a bit of a predicament. I am part of the Rebellion against the Galactic Empire.



PANAKA: I have no interest in joining the Rebellion...
BAIL: I have asked you to come to Alderaan to protect my family. Based on your experience, I believe you would be ideal for this assignment.



PANAKA: But is that not a job for Jedi? I'd heard some of the Jedi survived the purge.




BAIL: Sadly, none that I am aware of. All Jedi were hunted down by the Dark Lord, Darth Vader.



BAIL: Please follow me as I show you around my Palace, and introduce you to my wife and daughter. There may be some extended family as well...
 
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Elsewhere, on a distant Star Destroyer....



TARKIN: Construction of the Death Star is on schedule, my Lord.
EMPEROR: Good work, Tarkin. And what of the troop armor supply?



TARKIN: Unfortunately, it will take some time to change all of our current troops armor to the new Stormtrooper armor.



TARKIN: One problem begs to be solved; what are we going to do with the Clones engineered to be Commanders?
If Lord Vader is to command the infantry, they become obsolete.



EMPEROR: They have served their purpose. Eliminate them.



VADER: I will deal with the Commanders myself.




BACARA: Have you noticed our lack of orders lately?
RED COMDR: Something big must be in store for us.



BACARA: Quiet! Lord Vader is nearby. Looks like he is talking to our squad.



RED COMDR: Look busy, and we won't attract attention.
BACARA: Right...



step.....step......step......step......



step....step.....step......step.......



RED COMDR: Well, he's gone. We are in the clear.



TROOPS: FIRE!!!!



TROOPS: Check for survivors....



VADER: (breathing......breathing.....breathing....)
 
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CHAPTER 1 - KASHYKKK



On the Wookie planet of Kashykkk, a meeting between the Wookies and the Empire is about to begin...


TROOPER: Welcome to the Summit. Please leave your weapons. No weapons are allowed inside.




TROOPER: Surrender your weapons, we insist.
CHEWBACCA: Roar!!




TROOPER: Moff Tarkin, the wookie representatives have arrived.
TARKIN: Thank you. Please show them in.




TARKIN: Let me begin by thanking you for your hospitality. It will not be forgotten by the Empire.
TARFFUL: Roar roar roar...




TARKIN: We are eager to sign a peace agreement with Kashykkk. However, to maintain peace in the galaxy,
we must eliminate all threats to the Empire.
Including your friend, Jedi Master Yoda. Can you tell me where he is?




TARFFUL: Roar roooaaarrr...




TARKIN: Don't play coy, Tarfful. We understand that the Wookies of Kashykkk have good relations with Yoda.
His location is of vital importance.




TARFFUL: RRROOOOAAAARRRR!!!!
TARKIN: If you are not willing to cooperate, then we have no desire to sign a peace agreement
with a planet that hides traitors who flame the war of Rebellion!




TARFFUL: Roooaaarr roar





TARKIN: Your loyalty to the Jedi traitor will only serve to harm you and your people.
You have made a grave mistake, Tarfful.




TARKIN: Escort these warriors out now!
CHEWBACCA: RRRROOOOOAAAARRRRR!!!




VADER: They are hiding him. The Force tells me they know where he is.




TARKIN: If the Wookies do no want peace, then we will give them a war.
VADER: Leave them to me.




VADER: Trooper! Give the command to the 301st to begin the operation as planned.
TROOPER: Yes, sir!




TROOPER: 301st....execute the plan as scheduled.




301st COM: It will be done.




TROOPER: (over radio) ...leave no survivors....




301st COM: Move out!
ATRT TROOPER: Yes, sir!




Meanwhile, Tarfful and Chewbacca discuss what went wrong in the peace talks....
 
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CHAPTER 1 - KASHYKKK

Continued....



All across the planet of Kashykkk, the 301st execute the plan of the Empire...








The 301st kill any and all Wookies...




...even the women and the children...








...no matter if the Wookies are armed or not....








Tarfful and Chewbacca hear the cries for help by their fellow Wookies

TARFFUL: ROOOAAARRRR!!!!!
CHEWBACCA: RRRRROOOOOAAAARRRR!!!!




They begin their assualt on a small group of troopers
TARFFUL: Roar!!!












In their fury, they fail to see the snipers perched above the ruins...




TARFFUL: Argh......




CHEWBACCA: ROAR!!
STORMTROOPER: Aahhhh....




CHEWBACCA: Roar roar roooaarrrrrr
TARFFUL: rrrroooaaaarr.....rrr............




Chewbacca takes his dying friend as more troops begin to arrive...




From the the Summit, Vader oversees the slaughter taking place.




VADER: Call in the your Walkers to destroy what's left of the villages.




TARKIN: Very well.
VADER: This mission was unsuccessful. I will send a transmission to my Master.
 
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VADER'S QUEST - Chapter 2

DJAS PUHR



At one of the many cantinas on the ground level of Corucscant.....

FETT: You’re late, Puhr.
DJAS: Just on time, by my estimates.




DJAS: So, what information do you have about the missing Jedi?




FETT: There have been reports of two Jedi at the old Temple on Yavin 2.




DJAS: Who were they? Did anyone confirm the identities of the two Jedi?




FETT: Only that their cloaks gave them away. And if you want more details, I suggest actually researching your own assignment, Puhr.




DJAS: Nah, this is all I need. I can collect payment, and the Empire can do their own research.




FETT: Do not anger the Empire, Puhr. Even we cannot hide from them forever.




FETT: You did hear about Kashykkk, right? That was supposed to be a Peace Summit.




DJAS: I am no dumb Wookie. By the time the Empire gets their answer, I will be a long way from here.




DJAS: I can take care of myself, don’t forget. You’re much too cautious, Boba. Good evening.




FETT: Fool...





Back on a distant Star Destroyer…



VADER: (thinking) I must know for sure.....




VADER: What is it, Tarkin?
TARKIN: That bounty hunter, Djas Puhr, has made contact. He claims to have found two Jedi
at the old Temple on the second moon of Yavin.




TARKIN: And he demands payment for this information.




VADER: He will receive his payment after I have Kenobi.
 
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CHAPTER 2 - DJAS PUHR

Continued.....




On the Jedi Temple on Yavin 2...


UNILL: Begin!




UNILL: Good…




UNILL: Now rotate…




UNILL: Very good…




UNILL: Now move in…




JUKASSA: Yah!




UNILL: Very good, Padawan. Your saber skills are much better than mine ever were.
JUKASSA: Thank you, Master. I felt as if my actions were coming to me one move ahead.




UNILL: That is the Living Force speaking to you. It is that Force that I have faith in. It teaches you to live in the present time, and not the future.





UNILL: My old friend, Master Qui-Gon Jinn, first told me that we must listen to the Force as it speaks to us. It is that Force that guided us to the Peace Rebuilding missions these last three years, and now to this sacred Temple.





JUKASSA: But, Master, why have we not heard from the Council or any other Jedi?
UNILL: I fear that something grave has occurred. The dark side has encompassed everything now. We must listen to the Force more than ever now.





UNILL: I never agreed with the Council going to war so quickly. Wars leads to other wars. Qui-Gon was right in believing the Jedi Council relied too heavily on seeing the future. We must work on solving the galaxy’s problems, with peaceful solutions. The Living Force is our guide.




UNILL: Your short time in the Temple only allowed you to master your saber skills, due to this war. But, you must also calm your mind and listen to the Force. In time, you will become a great Jedi, much stronger than myself.
JUKASSA: Thank you, Master.




101st TROOPER: We have visual confirmation. The two Jedi are Master Mierme Unill and Padawan Zett Jukassa.




On the Star Destroyer orbiting Yavin 2


101st TROOPER: (over radio)….only two Jedi at the Temple…..
VADER: So, Kenobi is not there. Arrange a meting with Djas Puhr. Tell him we have his bounty ready.




VADER: When he comes to collect, destroy him.




VADER: I will handle the Jedi at the Temple.
 
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Chapter 2 - Djas Puhr

Continued.....



Across the galaxy, on the planet of Alderaan


BAIL: Captain Panaka, please allow me to introduce Captain Antilles. Antilles, this is Captain Panaka.




PANAKA & ANTILLES: Captain….Captain….
BAIL: I had him join us since he is also involved in the Rebellion. He also has a family, including a son with the talent to become a great star pilot.




BAIL: Besides protecting our families, Captain, there is also a special place I would prefer to preserve.





BAIL: Above the cliff ledge, you should see a monument we recently completed in memory of Senator Padme Amidala. You would remember her as the Queen of Naboo.
PANAKA: I was saddened to hear about her untimely death.




BAIL: The monument has become my daughter’s favorite place. She is at peace when my wife takes her there.





PANAKA: I must bring our attention back to your security. Do you have any credible information about the Empire’s movements?




BAIL: Yes. The Empire is hiring bounty hunters to find the leaders of the Rebellion. I have no doubt that I will be high on their list.




PANAKA: It will be difficult to monitor the planet for one ship, much less one person.
BAIL: Antilles can monitor any ships from the Tantive IV.





BAIL: After my family, my only concern is to prevent what happened on Kashykkk from happening here on Alderaan. We must be ready for the Empire if they arrive.




GARINDAN: (squeak...squeak...squeak squeak.....squeak)
 
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Chapter 2 - Djas Puhr

Continued...


At the Temple on Yavin 2…



UNILL: The dark side is near.




UNILL: I will investigate, but be on the lookout. Do not fear the dark side.




UNILL: Padawan, remember to calm your mind. The Force will protect you.
JUKASSA: Yes, Master. May the Force be with you.




UNILL: Something familiar about this dark side…




Outside the Temple…


VADER: Remain on the outside. Do not let anyone escape.




VADER: Remain in attack formation. Shoot any Jedi.




UNILL: This is sacred ground. Leave immediately.




As the Shocktroopers open fire, Master Unill begins his defense of the Temple

















VADER: (breathing…..breathing…..breathing…..)




VADER: It is unwise to turn your back on the dark side.




UNILL: The dark side always did try to take the easy path.




VADER: Did you expect to hide from the war forever, Unill?




UNILL: Death follows you, Sith. What else have you done…




SHOCKTROOPER: I have you now, Jedi.




UNILL: The Force is my ally.
VADER: Not anymore…




VADER: Do not underestimate the power of the dark side.




VADER: Find the boy.
 
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Chapter 2 - Djas Puhr

Continued...



TROOPER: Spread out. Call for backup if you see anything.








TROOPER: Lookout!




TROOPER: What did you say...




TROOPER: Aarrggghhh...




TROOPER: What was that?




TROOPER: You first...








TROOPER: Huh?




TROOPER: There you are..








TROOPER: Aahhhhh...




VADER: (breathing......breathing.....breathing.....)




ZETT: (thinking) Who is that....where is Master Unill?




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....)




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....breathing.....)




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....breathing.....)




VADER: You cannot hide forever...




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....)




VADER: (breathing.....breath)




VADER: (breathing..breathing..breathing..)




VADER: (breathing..breathing..breathing..)




VADER: You hide your fear well, boy.




ZETT: I am not afraid.




VADER: Impressive.




VADER: But not that impressive.




VADER: You still have much to learn about the Force, little one.




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....breathing.....)




VADER: Only now do you fear...




VADER: ...at the very end.




VADER: (breathing.......breathing.......breathing......)




TROOPER: What now, sir?




VADER: Destroy the Temple and everything in it.
 
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Chapter 2 - Djas Puhr


Continued.....



Back on Coruscant, on a ledge of a high-rise...


TROOPER: When he arrives, give him the credits first.




TROOPER: Here he comes, get ready.




DJAS: So, Vader sends his freaks. Where is my bounty?




TROOPER: Right here...




DJAS: Displeasure doing busin.....
TROOPER: FIRE!!!




















TROOPER: You....won't....get away.....with this...




DJAS: You're wrong....




DJAS: I already have.




 
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Longhorn,

Ever since I discovered the "scummer's stories" section of the ROTS thread, I've been loving the hell out of your stories. REALLY glad you brought them over here!

Keep 'em coming!!!
 
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Nice work, S_A_Longhorn. I really like to see them all together because it's hard sorting through all the various stories in the Scummer's Stories section. You've put a lot of thought, creativity, and work in these stories, and it really shows. I especially like the scenes on Kashyyyk. I found the shot of Chewbacca carrying Tarfful particularly touching. Keep it up!
 
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Thats just perfect! I love your work, it shocked me what they did with the commanders. Great work!
 
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That was great! Your diorama set ups are excellent! So minimal yet very effective!

The pix are so well done and well lit and the story was so good that I don't even notice the tupperware container.

Seriously, very good!
 
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Darth_Tedious said:
The pix are so well done and well lit and the story was so good that I don't even notice the tupperware container.
I think you looking at a dog dish, actually.

Thanx for all the feedback. My "sets" are simple and use stuff from around the house. I don't have the expertise to build real sets. I'll leave that to the experts.

Hopefully I will post new stories later this week.
 

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Wow. Great photography! I can't wait to see the rest of it!
 
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Chapter 3 - Bail Organa


On the dark side of Alderaan...



GARINDAN: (squeak squeak….squeak squeak squeak)




VADER: Good work. Your credits are being loaded onto your ship as we speak.




VADER: I have a new assignment. Find the bounty hunter, Djas Puhr. He is wanted for killing Imperial troops.




VADER: Contact me when you have his location, but I want him alive
GARINDAN: (squeak squeak)




At the Royal Palace of Bail Organa


PANAKA: An Imperial shuttle has just landed on the outskirts of the city.




BAIL: Now that the Empire is within range, proceed with the plan.




BAIL: We must stall the Empire to give Cpt. Antilles time.
PANAKA: No problem




BAIL: Welcome, Lord Vader. This is an unexpected visit. To what do we owe this honor?




VADER: You may dispense with your formalities. I am looking for the former Jedi Yoda and Obi-Wan Kenobi. When did you see them last?




BAIL: Not since their attempt to overthrow the Republic. But then I heard all jedi were killed by the Clone Army.




VADER: There are reports of the Jedi returning to Coruscant after the attack abord the Tantive IV.




BAIL: That cannot be true. I returned only to resign my position in the Senate. And as I said, I have not seen them since before the revolt.




VADER: Why did you leave the Senate, Organa?




BAIL: To spend more time with my family, including my baby girl. Bail Antilles has taken my place, though.




VADER: Is Alderaan now part of the Rebllion?




BAIL: Alderaan is peaceful. We have no weapons or rebels.




VADER: You are part of the Rebel Alliance and a traitor to the Empire! We are here to search for evidence of treason.




BAIL: We have not violated any laws of the Galactic Empire!! The Senate will not stand for this!




VADER: I hope you’re right, Organa. The Empire is not as forgiving as I am.



To be continued below...
 
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Continued...



Meanwhile, in the Communication Room…



ANTILLES: (thinking) If only I could get a find their frequency...




ANTILLES: (thinking) I think I got something...
TARKIN (over weak signal): ...we have arrived.....lord....




TARKIN: Since we are still having difficulty with space station main weapon…




TARKIN: …we will conduct a test on Alderaan with a new more powerful prototype cannon…




TARKIN: I will report back the results after Vader finds a target on the planet...




ANTILLES: So that’s why they’re here!




ANTILLES: Someone's coming...




PANAKA: And this is our main communications room.
TROOPER: Took long enough to get here...




TROOPER: Step away from the station. We are going to search your transmissions record.
ANTILLES: Do you need any assistance...




TROOPER: That won't be necessary.
TROOPER 2: Hands up!




TROOPER: This will only take a minute...




ANTILLES: I need to talk to Bail as soon as possible.




TROOPER: Lord Vader, there are many transmissions sent to Senators Mon Mothma and Meena Tillis.




TROOPER over comlink: ...no other people of suspicion...




VADER: Organa, what were the transmissions sent to Mothma and Tillis?




VADER: They are both critics of the Empire and members of the Rebellion.




BAIL: They're old freinds of mine, from my days of in the Senate. I was sending them images of my daughter only.




VADER: Don't lie, Organa. Your people would not appreciate my response. Now sit down!




BAIL: I have many close friends from my days in the Senate, like Senators Mothma, Tillis, and Amidala.




VADER: Who did you say.....




BAIL: Senator Padme Amidala from Naboo? She was a dear friend of the family, and died far too young.
VADER: So she is.....dead?




BAIL: Unfortunately, but we did build a memorial in her honor.




VADER: Where is this......memorial?




BAIL: Above the cliff, overlooking the city.




BAIL: But we have an ever-burning flame to always remind us of her. We celebreate life on Alderaan, not death, Lord Vader.




VADER: Let's go...




ANTILLES: They plan to test their new weapon here. Vader only needs to find a suitable location.




BAIL: Spread out. No telling what damage their weapon will cause. We must not let them succeed.




BAIL: Unfortunately, I may have just given him the target...




To be continued...
 
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Thanks for doing something that I wish I had knack to do. Not only do you construct creative storylines, but you take the time to create the scenes with your figures. The only action that my figures get is when they fall! Love what you're doing!
 
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Brilliant I can't wait to see more. I like that you included a little thing with Padme.
 
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Those pictures are great. I like how you focus on the story. I also really like the interaction between Bail and Vader. It reminds of Vader and Leia's first scene together. The poses are also very good, and the figures look like they are really interacting.
 
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Nice job! The only thing I didn't get is why Zett was still alive. Or was.
 
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I wish i had a creative brain instead of this dumb stupid one. Thats such a cool story and pics well done.
 
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this is really good!! are you thinking of entering it in the Photo novel Awards??
 
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ILuvToyz said:
Nice job! The only thing I didn't get is why Zett was still alive. Or was.
Someone else mentioned that to me. Well, I don't have the "skillz" to build sets or much patience for customizing figs, so just pretend some other funny-haired kid got shot in the movie. For my story, Zett and his Master, Unill (who was killed in the CW originally) survived! Work with me here people!!!

Thanx for all the compliments. I will post an update tomorrow.

As for the Awards thing, good luck with that. There may be someone on the panel who is not a fan of mine!
 
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VADER'S QUEST

Chapter 3 - Bail Organa

Continued.....



Vader approaches the Lighthouse Memorial on Alderaan





VADER: Stay here.




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....breathing.....)




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....breathing.....)




VADER: Padme......
















VADER: Padme.........




VADER: NNNOOOOOOO!!!!




VADER: (breathing...breathing...breathing...breathing...breathing)




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....breathing.....)




TROOPER: Your orders, sir?




VADER: Destroy the lighthouse.




VADER: (breathing.....breathing.....)
 
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COM. TROOPER: Assemble the cannon as quickly as possible.




TROOPER: No, no, no, THIS one goes there, THAT one goes there, right??




BAIL on comlink: I have found Imperial forces. They are assembling some sort of weapon. I'm going to need your help, guys.




COM. TROOPER: What is that noise?




TROOPER 1: We'll check it out.




TROOPER 3: Be on alert.








TROOPER 1: I got him!!!
TROOPER 2: I got him!!!




TROOPER 3: Quit joking around, guys.




BANG!!!




TROOPER 1: Let's go. We can't do anything for him.




TROOPER 1: Hey, watch where you're going!!




TROOPER 2: Give me some room!!!!
TROOPER 1: What was that?!?!




TROOPER 2: Hey, isn't that ours?
TROOPER 1: Don't touch it!!!!




KA-BOOM!!!




TROOPER 2: I....told....you....not...to..touch it...




TROOPER 2: Uh-oh....
 
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Continued.....



PANAKA: Good work, guys. There are still four more. We should use the cover of the forest to our advantage.




TECH. TROOPER: Sir, the cannon is ready.
COM. TROOPER: Go ahead with the plan.




TECH. TROOPER: Ahhhhh.....I'm hit......




SHOCKTROOPER 1: Move out! Now!




BAIL: I got one in my sight...




SHOCKTROOPER 1: I'm hit!!!




SHOCKTROOPER 2: The shot came from this direction...




COM. TROOPER: Bring...it...on!!!




TECH. TROOPER: Got....to....fire...the cannon...




BAIL: Lay your weapons down, and surrender your position.




TECH. TROOPER: Almost....there....




TECH. TROOPER: Got it.......
LASER BLAST!!!!!!!!




BAIL: What was that.....




BOOOOMMMM!!!!!!




COM. TROOPER: Sir, we have a successful test!!!




COM. TROOPER: Sir? Sir?




BAIL: We are now officially part of the Rebellion...




ANTILLES: Why were they so intent on testing this cannon?
BAIL: Study it, Captain. We have to warn the Rebellion and anybody else willing to listen.
 
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And another great chapter! Waves hand in front of SA Longhorn, "I forsee many upcoming chapters!"
 
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DUDE said:
where are the new ones?
Had less time lately. I am working on the next parts, but the updates will be less frequent. Just keep checking back.

Thanks for the inquiry, though!
 
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OK, here is the next chapter in VADER'S QUEST

Sorry for the delay....
 
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Darn! Something isn't working right on my computer. Only a couple of pics are showing up... I'll probably have to wait until I get home to look at this one.

 
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VADER'S QUEST

Chapter 4 – Tatooine

Several years have past since the altercation on Alderaan. The Empire continued their reign of terror by invading planets, or by simply committing genocide against species who would not submit to their power.



On the rolling desert plains of Tatooine


DJAS: (thinking) The Empire cannot reach me in the Outer Rim. But my work has to limited to these planets, at least until the Empire invades them.




DJAS: (thinking) Boba Fett once mentioned he found good work with the Hutts. No doubt MY services will be well compensated.




JAWA: EEEE-CHEEEEEE
DJAS: (thinking) But the pathetic creatures on this planet will be most annoying.




JAWA: Eeee-chooo-taaa!!
DJAS: (thinking) However, I do understand their insults...




BLAST!
JAWA: Eeeeeee-cheeeeee!!




DJAS: (thinking) Still, I may learn to like this place...over time.





Meanwhile, at Jabba’s Palace...



HAN SOLO: Oh, come off it, Bib. You know as well as I do that Jabba’s has enough work to keep me running across this galaxy for the rest of YOUR lifetime.




BIB FORTUNA: (in Huttese) Jabba does not want to be disturbed by mercenaries who don’t even have a ship to carry a Jawa in.




BIB: (in Huttese) But I will let Jabba tell you directly, this time.
HAN SOLO: Wouldn’t want it any other way, Bib!




BIB: (in Huttese) Sorry to disturb, sir, but the mercenary Han Solo requests a moment of your time.




JABBA THE HUTT: (in Huttese) FOOL!! I TOLD YOU NOT TO ADMIT THESE SNAKES!!




THUMP!
SOLO: Don’t get all angry, Jabba. I am willing to give you an extra 10% of my next shipment.




SOLO: But I want your word you won’t have your henchmen following me this time...




SOLO: ...including your bounty hunters.
BLAST!





JABBA: (in Huttese) Enough! You have proven yourself, smuggler!




JABBA: (in Huttese) I like your fearlessness and attenton to detail. Bring the weapons seized from the homestead.




JABBA: (in Huttese) Take these weapons to Kashykkk. Leaders of the Rebellion will pay.




SOLO: I thank you for your generosity, Jabba. A little help would be appreciated though...




JABBA: (in Huttese) Aaarrrggghhh!!! You little scum!!!
SOLO: Never mind...





SOLO: Sorry about that little incident back there. Lucky shot, I guess! No hard feelings?
BOBA FETT: .....



TO BE CONTINUED...
 
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