Thanks, Utinnii! I'm always amazed by your incredibly fast feedback. I got the beast on clearance from Amazon a long time ago. Thanks for the story feedback, I appreciate it! The cyborg Wookie comes from my good friend , Sjefke. He really outdid himself!That is an awesome cyberwookie! I like the way you introduced the main characters. That beast is really cool. Where is it from?
Interesting chapter. I found it a bit expository and I don't think you need to reference SW lines anymore (or only once per chapter).